This is beautifully written. Even though its short, its sweet (: 5/5

Oh this was so beautiful! I loved how you made it almost like.. suspenseful lol. Every stanza you got closer to one another and the kiss then came towards the end and now the beautiful memory remains. :] Adorable! I loved this poem.. so enjoyable and cute! 5/5

Aww this poem is so sweet! 10/10 by the end of it-i was reminded of how perfect my first kiss was. great job!

This poem is AMAZING. It reminds me of my first kiss!!! which wasn't as good as this poem, but I wish it was