Very beautiy writen i loved it.

Great job
keep writing

It was a good write. the structure and the flow were excellent too. the word choice was good. 4/5 : )

I read a few of your poem and of the few I glance at I must say this one is probally some of your best work. It forces the reader to capture the moment and the mere feeling within it. Title of it is a little iffy but great work!