Hullo well that was an interesting poem and one i enjoyed thouroughly and read four times.LOL
I actually had a bit of a chuckle when i read this
Well done

Grant

:) now this is the first time I've read a poem about thoughts. I liked the descriptions you used. Thoughts just go crazy without our consent..good one!
Take care

A very thought provoking write....
Good usage of words in a powerful message!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This is simply awesome, so very unique, loved it all the way.

all the best and take care

Very meaningful and to the point. I like it very much!