Comments : Tear stained paper

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Amazing. i love your way with words you have a great talent!! keep up the amazing work!! love this one. can sooo relate. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by katie

    Ok i realy like it you have tallent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was so powerful and your wording was sooo well done. It was short, but really well written. Youve really outdone yourself with this write i think. And youre a fairly skilled rhymer. Nice work. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This is incredible, really! amazing!! :) thankyou for writing it, its great to find people talented!!
    :):)

  • 15 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    Loved this poem. i liked how fast it was. yet you had to read again to just grasp it all. great job!!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    A fly rap, lol. good job, and thanks for the comment. lol. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece was good, though I did feel that it weakened as went on. The first two lines were great. A smile literally came across my face because I was so impressed by it. It was a great, unexpected rhyme, and the two lines just flowed perfectly. A really strong start. If you get the rest of this piece to the standard of the first two lines, this piece was be amazing.

    Brad

  • 14 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I liked it a lot! Even for being short, it was really good...had a punch behind it!
    Good job.
    5/5

    EmoBritboo

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I find myself pondering this action everyday.
    Awesome write. 5/5.