That Look in your eyes...

by carmen   Nov 18, 2008


That Look in your eyes...

That look in your eyes
always puts a smile on my face
each second each minute
of my day's it always makes them
shiner as never...

your my only star
up in those Cloudy, Dark Clouds...
with every look i take at you
the more you shine up in the clouds...

You are the one that will always
shine...just like your beautiful smile..
inside my heart you have brought your Light
with you...to fade away the dark
and keep me away from all the loneliness
and painless..that was about to enter
my Soul..
but you came right that second
and faded it all away from
my Beautiful Soul..

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  • 15 years ago

    by Taylor

    Amazing emotion. It basically jumps off the page:)

    very well written, keep it up:D
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Very touching poem!
    well written
    xo

  • 15 years ago

    by Skriptz

    Sorry for being late on commenting back lol
    but i read and all i can say is beautiful as well
    you can feel the emotion from it and it is on
    and upside cute too :) keep writing 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is absolutely beautiful and positive. There is always someone who can bring joy in one's life. Keep on writing, kel.