Wow... i love the principle of this poem its like you put all the sayings and truths about life in a poem....and i can totally get the aphroism half full or half empty..
wonderfully done its refreshing reading this poem
I loved this poem and if it were a one round contest you would have won, to be honest. I think that you wrote it flawlessly. The last stanza was a bit off at first, but the actual ending was great. I loved how you did the last two lines in each poem, wonderfully thought out (or just written, haha). "Never think 'Forever' - One 'Hello' means one 'Goodbye'." << Loved those two lines. I think that they're what grabbed my attention. Don't get me wrong the beginning was great, but they were the icing on the cake. Just as the two last lines in each stanza.
Wonderfully written, no actual criticism needed at all. You did an outstanding job.