Comments : Question

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Wow what a very sad poem, well it was for me anyway, a very well written poem.
    Also one the that seems to speak of intense longing?
    Well done on a lovely write

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is deep down sad and it leaves the reader with questions to ponder about..a touching write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I really enjoyed this little poem, your wording was beautiful and the line you finished on makes the reader question themselves! Really great job! Perfect flow too =]