Comments : Cried

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I lvoe when you get out from your slef halrea and you talk about your experiecnes but you alwasy say : "she"

    it is a very good thing to imagine the life like outside your body and describe it

    cuting is a NO NO NO !!!*cross arms

    but ina poem i say you did a great job
    5/5

  • So when she's gone
    No one cry.
    She wanted to die
    So she did; while she cried.

    omg tht was soo painfull and heartbreakinn
    but seriouslyy the way u wrote it makes it just soo wonderful:)
    5/5