A fairtale dream that has finally come true.
Is it what we thought it would be
A fairytale dream come true?

I think that there is too much repitition using fairytale dream. also fairtale - to - fairytale

Maybe we are what both of us have been searching for right in our sight.

I would change this to something more dramatic, since this should be a powerful and bold part of the piece.

Great write i love the flow and the emotion flowing from it 5/5 instantly =)