This was nice, Umm.. i would like to know what you think aboiut my poems

aw i like this poem! ^_^ if u have the time...drop by n comment some of my poems! i have a new 1...the one Thought Wrong...its like the only 1 of my poems that rymes lol...well later! ima read some other ur poems! 5!!!

This is a great poem, keep up the good work!

Pay no mind to anyone who says this poem is bad. I honestly think it is perfect as is. It is as though it was written for the moment. It made me visualize the situation. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it