Comments : To My Grave

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Creative poem, LOVE the lines of:
    - It's not doing it's job
    The scissors failed
    - I can kill you too, mate
    My scissors have two blades
    - When the cuts scar
    You can see the beauty
    Of my painful carvings
    On my deceased flesh etc.

  • 15 years ago

    by stella

    Love it<3

  • 15 years ago

    by Marie

    Great job! I love the begining, very strong poem