Comments : She Runs On Alcohol

  • 15 years ago

    by ether

    This reminded me of my party which reminds me of good times, only because of the title.

    I don't really have much to say to this. There was good parts, but other not so great parts too. But shot I'm glad you're writing again, even if you're still going through writers block <3

  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    Writers block?? No way!!

    "I'm constrained and convinced and convicted,
    And I still don't know how I got in this bed,
    I never made it nor laid in it (did you carry me here?)
    'You just don't have any confidence', yet another thing you said."

    I can relate to this stanza in so many ways
    It is n excellent poem!

    5/5
    Gem

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Maybe not your best but it got to me