You have an interesting way of writting, providing the reader with images as well as
things to think about. Good one!

Melissa, I truly love your poetry, but I was really busy lately and I haven't had time to comment.
This piece is amazing, I like the topic that you picked to write about, this can be applied to so many women, including myself. Deep, and overall original poem, greatly written.
Remarkable from the beginning to the end.