Wow thats really sad

Great work and I liked the message at the end. Even though I'm not one of those who have experienced it, I found it to be inspiring...well done

cheers, josh

Wow.... I can see ur pain through your words....your words are so groundbreaking

Oh, that was so sad. I am sorry this happened. You did a good job in expressing yourself.

Wow im so sorry for wah u been going through...buh in other words its a good poem, u wrote it well...and my advice is to move on because if ur to busy thinking and worrying about the past, u will miss out on the future......i wish the best for you....take care

Wow im so sorry for wah u been going through...buh in other words its a good poem, u wrote it well...and my advice is to move on because if ur to busy thinking and worrying about the past, u will miss out on the future......i wish the best for you....take care

Uhh..i did not go through anything like this..i just wrote this for all of those who have been through something like this..
just clearing things up. :)

Hmm I always read this sort of poem. Sad to say this really happens in real life :|

I feel sorry for the girls if those things happened to them..

Anyway great poem, suggestion change the (..) to (...)

:) tc

Wow, I really liked this poem. Well, not the fact that it actually happens but the writing of it. good job!!

Another amazing one Isha, sad and emotional but very expressive.
Keep writing!!!

5/5

Aish
xx

Keep writing sry to hear that happing to the girl and woman but also it happends to boys and men as well