Very good poem. It gave my an idea for my next erotic poem :) The wording was great and so was the flow. 5/5

£Jagged air I breathe
And sudden movements I take
Every reaction so raw
There is no such thing as grace"

I loved this stanza.

I've missed your poems since i've been away from the site and this is just a small example of what i've been missing!!

The first love is never forgotten, as he;s been given something you can give no one else. As long as you have no regrets m'dear

5/5 as always
gem

This remind me of my best friend and her white boy..they be getting it on

The flow was great and your word choice was amazing love it keep up the good work! 5.5

You feelings are real and spontaneous,
good one