Wow, this poem was amazing. I once heard that When inlove you can write the most magical poems, and this proves it. I can't tell which lines are your's and which are Karans. It was very beautiful and romantic, keep writing together. 5/5
Wow !! An amazing poem stuffed with love !!
It is truely an enjoyable read, I read it more than twice and each time discovered new meanings for yours words. You have done a great job by adding the touch of nature to your poem, for nature and love are consistent and complementary. It is obvious that each word is coming from the heart, great work both you. Keep it up !!