I Promise

by Megan   Dec 14, 2008


I promised to love you.
I promised to wait for you.
I promised to be with you forever.
I promised to never leave you.
And I broke ever one. But one thing is true...I still love you! If I said I would die for you then that would mean that I wouldnt ever be able to be with you ever again and I could risk that.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    This has a lot of repitition of "i promise"
    i think you should have either kept with the flow
    of a sentence to a line
    or one huge paragraph
    because it visually unattractive
    this is a good poem love
    feel free to look at any of mine
    i enjoy constructive criticism

    good job hun :]

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