Different Paths

by John Long   Dec 16, 2008


I carried my emotional baggage up her stairs and
Stored it under the bed,
Where it remained for many years,
Even after she wed.
A hidden thing gathering dust,
A wistful reminder of my love and lust.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is quite touching. I do love how you bare all, and your clever wordings make it that much more enticing. Beautiful and sad.

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Wow - you're fast becoming one of my favorite writers here. Excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    John,

    I remember how you once told me a story about a woman you loved dearly...I have a feeling this is about her.
    Some people are unforgetable, this is true.
    A lovely short poem about a dear memory:)

    Take care my friend,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Short but very good poem, very wistful x

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