Dude, this was like...its left me speechless. I can totally relate to what you write, thats another reason i love your poems! i can relate to most!! this was like amazing, flowed soo well and you really are a skilled rhymer. Your wording was imple, but so easy to connect with and powerful. Very excellent write here. 5/5

The flow was really niice..
as well i can relate to it,
keep up the good work, 5/5

*-aveena.

Great poem. I rate 5/5

Though, getting older doesn't solve everything, in the end, it comes down to you making the effort to move forward.

:)