Quite brilliant.
i enjoyed it

Wow this poem is amazing! i love the ending lines, it fits perfectly. You truely have an amazing gift.
Thanks so much for checking out my poem, it means a lot!
keep up the good work!

This was much more then outstanding. And i must say i think your choice of wording was excellent and it flowed perfectly, and your rhyme scheme was simply brilliant. Truly beautiful work. Keep it up 5/5