Wow Ingrid you have beautifully crafted this poem til perfection.The metaphors that you used really enables me to read between the lines.This poem was such a delightful to read as it has a stong visualization written within it.

Excellent Job
5/5

Now this si conform with the french poetry style ,but thsi is not rhyming althought it is not suppose to be ,

i liked the words but you used some hard ones even for me abit it enrich the poem but make it a bit hard to understand ,

2 things rhyme and easier words and expression

I like This poem a lot all I got to say is good job but plz check out my poems and polz comment :]

This was a really well written poem, it fitted the form very well and your opening line was amazing.
Thoughts like old rags caught on barb wire

This is a line that i will remember for a long time to come.. it was truely fascinating and it shows great imagination.
Overall your poem was really great and i enjoyed reading it.

5/5

This was very interesting Ingrid! I enjoyed reading it. The form was unique also. A good read. The only thing I noticed was there wasn't any periods or commas, other than that, I loved it.

Wonderfully Done Ingrid!!!

Wow! Some great lines in this one Ingrid!

'Thoughts like old rags caught on barbed wire
Floating on fading memories'

Wish I could of used those ones!, and the rest also.

Nicely penned Ingrid!