Comments : My Lullaby

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Amazing. just... wow. i love it. i can relate. keep it up. very... beautiful and sad. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Amazing. just... wow. i love it. i can relate. keep it up. very... beautiful and sad. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Krathia

    This poem broke my heart, it really did. Maybe it's because my head is very muddled at the moment, but it's as if I saw past all the words. I didn't read what you wrote, it's like I read between the lines. Instead of only seeing those words in my mind, I saw this profound sadness underneath, as if saying, "Nothing will ever be alright, but I'll let it be tonight. I hate being all alone, but loneliness has been around for so long now that its become a friend. Sing for me again, please." That's what I understood of this poem.