It was nice 2 read one from u after a long time.... & poetry does not mean professional poetry but sumthing that comes from ones heart right on paper..

Keep it up no matter what people think about structure, Language, rhyming etc....

Rgds & best wishes for ur future poems to come... Karan

"My heart become ocean of pain"
May your heart become an ocean of happiness one day!

This is so beautiful, I love it sooooo much, wonderful poem, it really spoke out to me!!!!