I think this is very good.

You showed some true emotion, its something i can relate too.

Is this how you feel? If you dont mind me asking.

Fantasy.

Amazing, something any reader can relate to. I love it. *bookmark*

Thanks! :3

Wow, this was wonderful.
Really great write.
Excellent work

I loved it very well written

This poem is so creative..
I can feel the expressions
Strong Poem..
Great Work!
5/5