Comments : I think of you

  • 15 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Well Sorry to be quite offensive but I believe that this poem could be quite better....There are some simple errors like Captializing the first letter in each line . Other things are like capitalizing your I's. I like the fact that each of it ends with "To calm my racing thoughts, I think of you" but just add just a little bit more emotion.
    Other than that it is pretty good so just improve and it'll be good.

    ~Lonely Rose