Nice poem.."to part from you is my kryptonite."..i love this line..keep writing more poems.....thumbs up

Great piece truly enjoyed it, although i think one part can be slightly changed

"be my wings and help me soar,
stitch this heart of mine you tore,"

to make it flow more you could say
"Stitch this heart of mine, which you tore"

Just gives it that flow :)
GREAT POEM 5/5