Comments : A Life Of Deprivation

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Don't worry hun, I am here for you, things will be alright

    ^^^This line was most funy of all!
    This poem cracked me up, Cara! You have to read it together with Porcy's to really enjoy it to the fullest, ha ha ha!
    Omg, you two are great together!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Aww haha this is cute and funny. i like love the rhyming. wonderful work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    Nice flow

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Hahah... this is so funny tt you wrote a poem reply to porcy of how deprive she is..to not taste tim tams and vegemites lol.I really think this poem is cute;) Excellent Job

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Hahaha lol yous are funny. And yes, she most certainatly has not lived until shehas tasted vegemite and tim tams. Theres too good to live without. =] excellent work. Still smiling from that. lol 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    Haha! This is great! Really enjoyed reading this, excellent! :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Grandpoet

    Not funny,but beautiful execution.I love this poem!
    U employd the use of rhymes beautifuly,plus the simplicity reminded me of Ogden Nash.Bravo!

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Australian veggimite is not good whatsoever. lol. but that is what made me laugh.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Urge to scream Aussie and oi rising...