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Really nice its is.
but there is one thing I would consider changing ;
As soon as I found about you and her,
I was enraged with anger.
I thought "maybe I'll go out tonight,
And make out with a stranger."
it didn't really flow
by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf
Wow... I can really relate to this because this EXACT same thing just happend to me... 8( I really enjoyed this poem!!! It was so believable.... great work!
Wow this is a really good poem i know how that feels and here reading this i got the same emotion, toward the end you started to lose the flow but its still really good.