Comments : You were the death of me...

  • 12 years ago

    by Aveena

    Really nice its is.
    but there is one thing I would consider changing ;
    As soon as I found about you and her,
    I was enraged with anger.
    I thought "maybe I'll go out tonight,
    And make out with a stranger."

    it didn't really flow

  • 11 years ago

    by iM LYiNG tO MY SELf

    Wow... I can really relate to this because this EXACT same thing just happend to me... 8( I really enjoyed this poem!!! It was so believable.... great work!

  • 11 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    Wow this is a really good poem i know how that feels and here reading this i got the same emotion, toward the end you started to lose the flow but its still really good.