The poem had a awesome flow almost like a song until the line that ened with see me
and then you stop the flow with < I think we should call it quits I'm not the same girl I was
befor and then you go back to the flow with your last two lines which rhym perfect check it out see if you agree you want your
poem to just roll off your tongue so that it keeps the flow going like " roses are red
violents are blue I wish I was there kissing
you" see how that sings that is how your poem was until the part I told you about I hope you like my help it suck when you can't
say anything to any body you know like they take it as a insult. I'd been a fan of your
poetry a long time. what did you do with all your old stuff I hope you save all them there
must have been 50 or more you deleted