Wow, you really blew me away with this piece. The emotions were pouring out throughout it all, and you really gave the reader a sense of what you were feeling. Great images too, this poem of yours came alive. I love how you said that your mind and heart both tell you different things, but in the end it turns out its not a dream. Beautifully written, this was a pleasure to read from the start to finish. Can't wait to read more of your work, 5/5 from me, keep writing always and forever....

Wow.
This is the most beautiful poem I have read in a really long time.
It was full of intense emotion and it blew me away.
5/5, excellent job.