Comments : Shot to Pieces

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Know someone like this...I am this woman! Well, I was, sadly that relationship's over. Anyway, I've not come to talk about my pain, I've come to comment on your piece, crazily enough, lol.

    To be honest, nothing really jump out at me in this piece, apart from the fact it was close to home, personally. I felt it was all a bit average, I'm afraid. The words, rhymes, structure were all things that have all been seen quite a few times before.

    However, one thing that did catch me off guard, was the Stepford Wife line. I thought that particularly was very well used and unique.


  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria

    Perfect write. Andd yes. I think we all have seen this atleast once!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow this is truly incredible, supreme poem you wrote here, two thumbs up, I love everything about the poem it is so amazing and really got to my heart strings!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Beautiful. I love your work!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "I think everyone knows at least someone like this"


    No truer words were spoken!
    Well written and well rhymed.

    All the very best,