Wow. tim this was beautiful from beginning to end. i realie love it. Amazing job. Keep it up!

5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Wow, this was good. i love it. raw emotion, deep, just beautifully written.
--lovedroughtmelody

I agree with TPAM >.>

good poem tho.
twas cute.
if u like that sort.

I agree with TPAM >.>

good poem tho.
twas cute.
if u like that sort.

Thx..

I really like your short poems! ;) 5/5 great job!

Omg, nice poem [:

This poem is so sweet. its writeen well. good job. 5/5

I agree very sweet poem way to go

Oh dang!
amazazazing<333333
veryyy niiiiiiiiiice...
i dunno what to say<333
wowee <3333
5/5

wow....
<333

Very amazing it was really sweet..

5/5

Short and sweet, just the way some of the best written poems are. Picturesque love scenes.
5/5
-Heather

I love the flow of this poem :)

Beautiful <3

Love is an infilling to solve. A sacrifice, that works relief. Speedier the go, closer the end. Patience purifies desire.