Some of the characters are unrecognized, might wanna edit it out, because it shows up a bunch of weird things. :]
This had nice rhyme, really interesting perspective.
I find the depth sort of lacking though. It needs a little background, some sort of story behind the drunken nights and no good time.
The style drew me in. This part sounds a little childish but yet I really like it.
"Boyfriends come and boyfriends go,
Time flies by, time goes slow.
Bone by bone, I am exposed,
Growing smaller, unopposed."
The stereotypes sort of...bring to my attention that this has a type of narrow-minded opinion to it.
Overall, a pretty good piece.
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A enjoyable piece to read, your rhyming was flawless and you really drew me into this piece. I loved how descriptive your word were, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....

Good work. Keep writeing.