Comments : Turn Down The Noise

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    You are exactly right, if we stopped and listened to the nature in the world, we would realise how truly beautiful it is. We are so busy with our modern lives that a lot of us forget that nature is out there. Its a beautiful thing really.
    A great poem, really good flow and rhyme and i really loved it :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Excellent flow and imagery building up to a sensual revelation

    well done