I Really Do

by Tripp   Jan 21, 2009


You were my purpose, you were my goal
You were my heart and you were my soul
You are my love, you are perfect for me
Yet for you I am not, who you want me to be

For what's deserved I've given what's not
I've given to you what I should have begot
I've given you pain, misery, deception and lies
with each one of my transgressions, part of us dies

Yet for every life lost another begins anew
as each day passes I realize what's true...
and I realize that well Becky,
I really do love you

For once upon a time we said "forever"
and we were both convinced we would end never
Well the day has come for me to prove what's true
the day has come for me to prove,
I really do love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Oh woww ,
    it flowed so nicely,
    and i really enjoyed it,
    especially how it ended with the 'i love you' bit.

    'I've given you pain, misery, deception and lies
    with each one of my transgressions, part of us dies'

    just wow. that part was soo well written
    (Y)

    i gave you a 5/5

    cindy -

  • 16 years ago

    by BrittBaby aka wonderwoman

    For an unintentional poem it came out really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Nice poem. I give you a 5/5. Your rhyme was great and the flow of it was nice. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I really enjoyed this poem, To be honest it's one of the best iv'e seen on here in a while =]

    The flow was carried through all of your stanza's and the rhyme was consistant, great work. As for the poem it's self I found it to be an emotionally honest piece that was beautifully written.
    5/5

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