Comments : Pestilent

  • 10 years ago

    by Melissa

    Absolutely amazing! I adore your poetry, you have such a charming way with words...

    "You're a
    silhouette
    much like beauty,
    unfaithful and yet
    loved anyway."

    ^^^Love this part!

    And the last stanza is by far my favorite, it really tied the whole piece up marvelously... A fantastic read, one I can relate with.

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wonderful wording, this was another brilliant and mind-blowing poem. I really find no flaws in your pieces, and your writing is beyond great, so keep it up! A enjoyable read, straight from the heart. 5/5 from me :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Rolo

    Definitely enjoyed reading this piece. I felt the structure was very befitting, I never got bored. It was almost as if I was reading a new poem with each break.

    "You're a
    silhouette
    much like beauty,
    unfaithful and yet
    loved anyway.
    A desired
    alchemist
    turning hearts
    to stone
    carefree monochrome
    of darkened destiny."

    ---I love the word choice and description in this stanza. It paints an image into my mind, and I really appreciate that. It reads easily and with a great amount of depth.

    I was drawn in by the title, but hooked by the detail and emotion. I rarely comment, but I just had to. I'm also adding this poem to my favorites. I'll be reading more. Great job...5/5, definitely!

    -Rolo

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really can't express how this write made me feel. It could be one of the best you've written, in my opinion. I'm truly speechless, and I feel that nothing I would say could give justice to this poem.
    I somehow missed to read this when you posted it.
    It's flawless, it's breathtaking, and I don't feel like taking it apart and commenting every stanza separately, because, sincerely, it's perfect to me from the beginning to the end.

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this blew me away. The words are so strong and dynamic. Really a great write.