Wonderful wording, this was another brilliant and mind-blowing poem. I really find no flaws in your pieces, and your writing is beyond great, so keep it up! A enjoyable read, straight from the heart. 5/5 from me :)
I really can't express how this write made me feel. It could be one of the best you've written, in my opinion. I'm truly speechless, and I feel that nothing I would say could give justice to this poem.
I somehow missed to read this when you posted it.
It's flawless, it's breathtaking, and I don't feel like taking it apart and commenting every stanza separately, because, sincerely, it's perfect to me from the beginning to the end.