Metaphorically this could be taken as disillusioned words like bullets bark
While human gods aim for their mark and to me what could be more flattering to a master poet as Bob Dylan that you would discover this as he probably reworded
Many profound metaphorical observations
Good poem. I believe you have lots of emotion in it. I just feel the flow is off on the second and last stanzas, you seem to force the flow a little. Also, "and ruin a perfect past" doesn't seem to make sense, but that might be just me. Overall, good.
I have added this to my favorite poems, if you don't mind. This poem is the first to be on my Favorites List. I loved the way it flow, I loved the everything of it.
I thought it was a real clever way of writing it. I give you a 5/5 for this beautiful write.