Woah this was really good. Loved the way it flowed and the rhyming. Really cute and sad poem. Great Work

I agree it's a very sweet yet sad poem
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I really liked it, good job!

Thank you, both(:

Awww. thats sad hun. :( but its very pretty your very talented

This is sad, but very beautiful, and very well written.You put a story, a sad story into a poem, and putting a story into a poem, is the most difficult thing to do, at least for a poet.
But, at this one, you did it excellent.
5/5 and keep writing.:)

Awww this poem is sad indeed, i like how you penned this down.I also like the idea of how you made revolve aroud a fairytale It just sux to love someone but tht someone doesn't love you.Well keep it up;)

Excellent Job
5/5

I really liked this..
it flowed really good and it was a mixture of sadness and love.
P.S. i think at the end you should put,
-Im living a broken fairytale.-
but this was very well done.

*Hunny*