WOWAH!! i loved this, it was so heart felt..
i could almost feel the pain you describe.

Inside twisting
Crying on out
Wrist begin to bleed
Heart needing to shout

my favourite verse.. it sticks out from the rest..
its really sad when ones heart gets broken

10/5 <3 (: xx

First verse is my fav.
well writ, it flows nicely :)

"Shouting disgrace
Leaving me in pain
Heart so torn
Making me insane."

-God, I hate this being able to relate thing,
it's what makes me realize I have a problem.

5/5 anyway, great stuff dude.

Hazel eyes hurt
Tears begin to burn
About to collide
From this wide turn

*This was my favorite stanza. Your sad poems remind me of some of mine :) You always write with such emotion. I love that. Keep it up hun. Nik*

This was... origional and deep. 5/5 good job ^_^