Wow this was a piece of excellent and true poetry without a doubt. I'm very impressed with this piece, if I do recall what the lyrics are to the poem Lips of An Angel.. youve done such a wonderful job using the song and making it into a poem. Not only that, but you used a rhyme scheme that was consistant and gave the poem a flawless flow with no awkward bumps that forced the reader to stop while reading. The words you used were amazing.. the countless similies used in this piece made it a masterpiece. Youve outdone yourself here :]

Well done.
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5/5.

Awww what a fantastic write. I love the song that your poem was based off and you wrote a poem that matched the lyrics very well :]
The flow and rhyme were amazing and really added an extra thing to your poem.. it was really very well done :]
Keep up the fantastic work Ingrid :]
5/5

It is a dilema (spelling?) when you love two different people but in the end, only one of them can make you feel like this. Good job. 5/5

An excelent poem, i thought of the song b4 i went to the link. you captured the essence and feelings from the song very well acurately. it doesent matter if this actually happened to you or not because you tapped into all the right things. a good song and a great poem.

Hey man, Im not saying your poem is horrible, but sometimes I think its more who you know, than talent on this site.
Anyway, I really think that your poem was okay, but you could have probably have written a better one. Hope you stay writing at poems-and-quotes for years to come.

In love with two people, and all the guilt that can cause, all elequently put into a truly heartfelt poem.
This is a good piece Ingrid, so descriptive and full of emotion. Well penned.