I've got to admit.. the title really caught my attention, but I think you shouldn't put it [along with the actual poem] in all caps. I think it's against the rules too. >< Just saying...

I still really like the title.. and I think the poem was pretty good. I liked your use of the word "poison", and I also like how you were saying that the pain of missing her is so strong that it's made you go deaf. I've never thought of it that way....

Good job. :]

Cayce.

I like this you did a good job
Your choice of words were great

"THE PAIN OF MISSING HER HAS DEAFENED MY EARS,
WISHING I COULD HOLD HER FOR THE REST OF MY YEARS
SILENCE HAS REPLACED THE SOUND OF MY RAIN
ALTHOUGH I CANT HEAR IT, I CAN STILL FEEL THE PAIN,"

I do believe is the best part.

And the way you used poison...was amazing. You used it to create an awesomely powerful feeling in the reader. You created a poem where now whenever someone hears "poison" they will think of this poem.

Amazing job =)

Im pretty sure its against the rules to have your poem all in caps and i dont think it added anything to the piece anyway. So maybe change it to lowercase.

WISHING IN MY HEART I COULD HEAR IT AGIAIN.
^^ should be again.

the title was great, it lured me in. It stood out and made me choose this poem to read and comment. So that was good.
The actual poem was pretty good as well. It was an enjoyable read and you incorporated some strong messages throughout it. I like the way you 'went deaf' after losing her. Really nice job with that.

Overall a good read.