I think it needs to be more structured, personally i would for example change it to something like this...

After all we had together,
Now is thrown away in the air.

The love i feel for you is still strong,
And i know you still care.

Is hard to give up on you when it's been more than a year,

My heart still can't believe you're gone,
I'm lost in tears.

Or even without the spaces between i think it will just break it up better anf help it flow and be easier to read. Also something that i often get criticised on is some lines rhyming and some not, i personally don't think it's an issue others think otherwise.

The poem shows great emotions, i really like the ending. 4/5

Hmm... The rhyming is goOd and yOu've expressed yOurself well. I, hOwever, do agree with cOvered in darkness abOut the structure. ImprOve it so that it has paragraphs and will attract the reader. Also,

``Is hard to give up on you when it's been more than a year.
--> I think it should be 'IT'S hard....' here.

Still, goOd wOrk and I like it! :)

Btw, m giving it a 5/5 sO that the Overall rating is what the pOem shOuld have!

:).

After all we had together now is thrown away in the air.
The love i feel for you is still strong and i know you still care.
Is hard to give up on you when it's been more than a year.
"My heart still can't believe you're gone, I'm lost in tears."

-Good start, I like it basic, it shows automatically what this poem will be about.

"Someone Told me before that love is never painless.
but i was hoping my heart would remain stainless."

-Rhyming here is pretty basic, but the fact that it is basic, just adds to the overall effect

"Instead i got into the worse situation ever.
would i love someone again? my answer is never."

-Worst situation? I can tell what you are talking about but this poem would have been more emphasized if you would have added what the situation was.

"The love I'm willing to share and give you is real.
Just say you'll stay babe, and we have a deal."

-I really like these 2 lines, it's short and simple, but it's to the point.

"Don't keep someone you love away
And remember i love you forever not just for today. "

-This was a good way to wrap up the poem, it ties the whole poem together.

Overall, this poem was good. The structure itself might've been better, but the rhyming should stay the way it is. The flow itself wasn't to neat, but you could really tell what you were talking about. Great Emotion.
4/5

Sorry about the first part my computer copied wrong

I enjoyed it, good job.