Everyone dreams

by coverd in darkness   Jan 28, 2009


Persona of someone everyone dreams of,
Ever so charming, sweet and cute,
Someone unique unlike anyone else you'll ever meet,
Special in so many ways,
Wish our time together would never end,
Guess you can never know what's around the next bend,
They make you feel safe so very secure,
When they hold you it's hard to breathe,
Love so divine hope it never dies,
Eyes for nobody but you,
The love dedication one hundred percent true,
Holding you up high through every low,
There for you whenever you need,
Someone like that must be a dream.

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  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Yes, so many times we thaught our dreams came true only to wake up next to a pillow.
    vary sad truth.vary good.

  • 15 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it for real :)

    keep up the good work
    supernova
    smile all the time :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This is so cute<3 It has a lot of great emotion in it. And I can totally relate to it! Great poem! I think you should write more though, I'd love to hear a longer version. But either way it's good! Grea flow! And I'm glad it doesn't rhyme because sometimes when poems rhyme, it gets off topic or just doesn't make sense.
    Excellent job 5/5

    Soda<3

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I like what you have penned down. It is true that everyone desires someone who matches their own personality. Sometimes we think a person like that only exist in our dream. It was certaily deslightful to read. Keep it up

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    Very relateable, sweet and true! :)

    It's excellent but I think you can improve it by paragraphing... It'd give the poem a better stucture, I think... :)

    5/5
    Keep It Up! :)

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