Wow, Mark. That was a very interesting poem. I really like how you counted down with numbers... I've never read a poem like that. And even though it was so different.. it flowed really well.

8. a stupid act of selfish pride
7. made you leave without a tear
-- All I can say is that I can really relate with these two lines here...

Awesome poem.

Cayce.

Excellent poem.5

I like this, and if u ready nine to one it's even more deeper.

I like the bullet points, shows how hurt you are and what hurts you most, 8 being the least; 1 being the most. Deep, 5/5. Em x

I meant 9 being the least hurtful lol not 8 :) x