Wow! i love this!!! its really good! plz pm me sometime i would love to talk with u!!

This was really good. The emotion was so strong. I hope your friend doesn't go, and you follow. It would be a waste of a wonderful talent. I enjoyed it :)

Wow this is really deep. very emotional and just deep. hope yer friend is okay babe

I would like to start with the emotion behind the poem.. great feeling sad.. but i have an almost positive feeling its true.. jake and you are good friends friends dont leave each other behind.. he is lucky to have someone who cares wither he goes or stays.. very lucky. as for the actual poem well written very good structure.. and it is good to see that u put the same amount of effort into nearly all ur poems.. i have not been disappointed.. yet :P keep up the work ill be reading it..

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