Comments : Sunsets

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Excellent nature piece, I loved all the similes and words you used, it set the scene perfectly and created clear, breathtaking images for the reader to come across.

    "Specks of gold sparkle like hidden treasure,
    Beneath the darkness and exquisite colors,"

    Great descriptions, you are so in-deepth it just wows me!

    "Reddish-Orange colors scintillate as autumn leaves fall,
    Plum-pink rainfall gleams within,"

    How colorful, you really made this poem come alive.

    "Like a desire to make passionate love,
    Gracefully interlaced as betwixt as a bonded army of menage."

    Another good simile, and your wording is so meaningful and wonderful!

    5/5 from me, I heartily enjoyed this nature piece, keep up the amazing work! Take care and Happy Valentine's Day!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Thank you very much... wish u a Happy Valentine's Day too =)