Comments : Edge of My World

  • 15 years ago

    by Allie

    Very good choice of words.
    I could almost visualize your dream myself.
    keep up the good work ^-^

  • 15 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Strange.....I had a dream like this before.

    Well, now you've certainly captured my interest, and memory.
    I thank you for your respectable comment on my poem, so I'll respect your wishes and not write a stupid comment like "Ohh i just loove this poem! what imagery!" :p

    Because, its so much more than that.

    This is the first poem of yours I've read yet, and I'm already anticipating more. Since I saw a wolf as your profile picture- If you wish, you can read more of mine that have to do with wolves or wild nights, I have many.

    But yes, Dark yet delightful, this is a poem to be proud of.

    -Weeping Wolf

  • 15 years ago

    by Nix

    I like some parts, but I also dislike some parts. I am not sure what I think about this one. It is emotionally powerful. Though I truly don't like your rhyming during this poem.
    I was amazed by second and third stanza. In my opinion, other parts of the poem are good, but not on breathtaking level.

  • I like this poem. You are still writing great and I'm finally making my come back with my poetry...finally. You are still doing great though! :)

    All the luvvles!

    ~~Katie the Kat~~~