How nice. Dance of love, love is a dance as you have described. Good job. 5/5

Excellent imagery and emotions running through this piece! I have never heard of this form, so thank you for posting this, a beautiful read from start to finish, and I learned a new form! Take care, and Happy Valentine's Day!

Very well done its nice to see a different style. ill be lookin out for more of ur poems :)

*ash*

Ingrid,
Wow, hot, hot! Your Valentines day must have been interesting :] lol.
Really nice use of the form and it was really well done.
5/5

Such sensuality in so few words. That takes a lot of skill, excellent.

So sensually written with just a few words.. two peoples eyes meet, their lips lock, and the dance of love begins. (:

Beautiful piece.. after seeing this form used a lot lately by a lot of poets I think its my time to give it a try.

Well done Ingrid.
5/5.

Such divine ecstasy indeed. Sublime, blissful.

An interesting short poem Ingrid, with such explosiveness in every word used!
From meeting to making Love in six short lines.
Well penned!