I really don't like love poems.. >< Mostly because there's nothing new.. it's just the same old stuff.. so I don't want to really critique this.. because it'll sound really mean, and it's not just your poem, it's all love poems. But I'll point out a few things.. :]

Hand by hand we walk.
-- I think this would sound better like.. "Hand in hand we walk. Just a suggestion.

In your arms I find my heart.
-- This is definitely my favorite line in the whole poem. I don't know why.. I guess it's because it's a little different.

Anyways.. I think it was really sweet and you wrote it from your heart. It sounds like you've got a great guy. Haha. :]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Awww. hat was so sweet. Adam is a lucky guy. You really put your heart into this poem. :]

Cayce