Comments : Tired

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I hope you really don't feel this way
    but your poem for me was great
    keep writing and i'll keep reading

  • 10 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    Man, this is a wonderful work. I love it! The tune in it is really touching, It's truly like Your Word, and i bet u will always keep that guts and traits of being yourself no matter what, man! keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Awww you write about me! Lol its very sad but I love the rhyme scheme and the flow.
    Its so well structured and the words just hit me. Good write 5/5
    Thanks for the comment on my poem too :)

  • 10 years ago

    by XXVAMXXPIEXOX

    5/5 i really like this poem... hope you are not going trough it.. really took my attention in!! keep writting i'll be reading

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    That is a very sad statement..you will always be somebody, even after death!
    This poem reveals so much sadness and resignation..I wonder if it was the same, say 100 years ago ,when each person had to work in the fields all day long and we didn't have that much time to think...I often feel we have too much time to think about ourselves ( I am one of them!)
    You did well on portraying your emotions, I hope things will feel different soon:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very sad write lol... deep, and heartfelt. At times in our lives circumstances are like dark clouds that surround us... and we feel there is no way out. Depression can cause a weariness in our life that is hard to express, but you expressed it well here lol.. Hope things are looking up for you.

    Best wishes,
    Olwin.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Such a deep, emotional piece. We all get like this at times. Good job, 5/5. Em x

  • 9 years ago

    by Biya

    Wonderful wonderful ..awesome ... I love the poem ... excellent ..I was in search of sucha poem ..Thank you -- 5/5
    biya

  • 9 years ago

    by Siham

    What's a wonderful poem is this !!!! one of the best that i've ever read , so sad & deep .
    Perfect job 5/5 .
    ...!!!!! Nothing other to add

  • 9 years ago

    by missy

    I love this poem and everyone feels that way at sometime or other. keep writing!!! i look forward to reading more from you... plz!!! keep writing!!

  • 9 years ago

    by missy

    I love this poem and everyone feels that way at sometime or other. keep writing!!! i look forward to reading more from you... plz!!! keep writing!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Liliana

    So deep, great poem :)

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Flowed very well and I feel you!