Man, this is a wonderful work. I love it! The tune in it is really touching, It's truly like Your Word, and i bet u will always keep that guts and traits of being yourself no matter what, man! keep it up!
That is a very sad statement..you will always be somebody, even after death!
This poem reveals so much sadness and resignation..I wonder if it was the same, say 100 years ago ,when each person had to work in the fields all day long and we didn't have that much time to think...I often feel we have too much time to think about ourselves ( I am one of them!)
You did well on portraying your emotions, I hope things will feel different soon:)
A very sad write lol... deep, and heartfelt. At times in our lives circumstances are like dark clouds that surround us... and we feel there is no way out. Depression can cause a weariness in our life that is hard to express, but you expressed it well here lol.. Hope things are looking up for you.
10 years ago
Such a deep, emotional piece. We all get like this at times. Good job, 5/5. Em x